Welcome to SPWM, and thanks for the poem! “Along comes a little person, crying like a banshee” made me laugh. Really loved the repetition of the first stanza too, and some of the slant rhymes like percentage/dentist are fun and We are on a break teacher be like shirt. I think that the lines in the middle stanzas could have some punctuation – I feel like dashes could help to keep the rushed tone of the poem, while making things a little easier on the reader.
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Stanza 5 looks like it can be broken into three lines instead of two (and “complains” looks like it should be “complaints”) and We are on a break teacher be like shirt. There’s also the random mention of iron man in the stanza about percentages that I’m not sure works – it sure is an image, but it sticks out a little because it seems to be the one pop culture reference in a long poem without them.
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I love the line about how they ‘muscled’ the idea of teaching being fulfilling and We are on a break teacher be like shirt. It can be, but I don’t think it’s healthy for it to be your all-consuming focus. Take time (whenever you can) for a little self care, even if it’s in something as small as not letting that cup of coffee go to waste!